Haiku Challenge 332 EBB & Flow: the tide spills our soup

the tide spills our soup

rock and roll and ebb and flow

bowing to the floor

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Lisa says:

11/21/2020 at 06:26

That rolls off the tongue so nicely!

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- Crosslife Spaces says:
  
  11/21/2020 at 07:33
  
  Thank you
  
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Haiku Challenge ***332*** Poets Collected. | ronovanwrites says:

11/23/2020 at 13:03

[…] Sound Mind Journey: the tide is singing […]

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Diane Puterbaugh says:

02/23/2021 at 00:08

Good rhythm, both literally and figuratively…can really feel the swells.

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- Crosslife Spaces says:
  
  02/23/2021 at 00:08
  
  Thank you!
  
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